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		<title>By: Trish</title>
		<link>http://listverse.com/2007/09/21/top-10-tips-for-great-writing/comment-page-2/#comment-489162</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Trish]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 May 2012 03:16:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[9. Punctuation and Speeling? Was that first &quot;sentence&quot; a joke? Hilarious!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>9. Punctuation and Speeling? Was that first &#8220;sentence&#8221; a joke? Hilarious!</p>
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		<title>By: HeatherG</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[HeatherG]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 May 2012 05:26:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[#8, I believe, could be more appropriately rendered as &quot;Vary sentence length&quot;. Too many short sentences make for choppy-sounding writing, whereas longer sentences contribute to a meandering flow. Sentence length can also be used for &quot;atmosphere&quot;. Reading your writing out loud will demonstrate this concept, and will also show where the writing doesn&#039;t flow, or if it chops too quickly, or becomes too long and difficult to complete in a single moderated breath.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>#8, I believe, could be more appropriately rendered as &#8220;Vary sentence length&#8221;. Too many short sentences make for choppy-sounding writing, whereas longer sentences contribute to a meandering flow. Sentence length can also be used for &#8220;atmosphere&#8221;. Reading your writing out loud will demonstrate this concept, and will also show where the writing doesn&#8217;t flow, or if it chops too quickly, or becomes too long and difficult to complete in a single moderated breath.</p>
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		<title>By: Juli</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Juli]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Feb 2012 13:14:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Passive verbs include “is”, “were”, “was”, “could have”, “would have”, and so on. Take this sentences for example:

&quot;Take this sentences&quot;?   Oops!  Even those who write about writing are not immune to errors.  :-)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Passive verbs include “is”, “were”, “was”, “could have”, “would have”, and so on. Take this sentences for example:</p>
<p>&#8220;Take this sentences&#8221;?   Oops!  Even those who write about writing are not immune to errors.  <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: bobnickmad</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bobnickmad]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Jan 2012 21:03:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[3.The first sentence is stronger because is another freaking word. I hated that point.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>3.The first sentence is stronger because is another freaking word. I hated that point.</p>
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		<title>By: BubbleShooter</title>
		<link>http://listverse.com/2007/09/21/top-10-tips-for-great-writing/comment-page-2/#comment-454865</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[BubbleShooter]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jan 2012 21:35:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi, how are you? I hope you are doing well. I needed to say that I like this post.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, how are you? I hope you are doing well. I needed to say that I like this post.</p>
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		<title>By: vfj2d87zAh</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jan 2012 02:11:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Brenda</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Brenda]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Dec 2011 19:29:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Now I&#039;m scared to write. 
Thanks a lot for sharing, it comes very useful!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Now I&#8217;m scared to write.<br />
Thanks a lot for sharing, it comes very useful!</p>
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		<title>By: ShoresLady</title>
		<link>http://listverse.com/2007/09/21/top-10-tips-for-great-writing/comment-page-2/#comment-446108</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[ShoresLady]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Dec 2011 09:35:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Also helpful and so infrequently seen is having something worth saying in the first place.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Also helpful and so infrequently seen is having something worth saying in the first place.</p>
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		<title>By: JustSayin'</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[JustSayin']]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Oct 2011 16:40:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Both examples in number six display the same punctuation error. There should be a semicolon before the word &quot;however.&quot; What you&#039;ve provided is an example of another punctuation sin: the comma splice. Those were the bane of my twelfth-grade English teacher&#039;s existence. I can see her point.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Both examples in number six display the same punctuation error. There should be a semicolon before the word &#8220;however.&#8221; What you&#8217;ve provided is an example of another punctuation sin: the comma splice. Those were the bane of my twelfth-grade English teacher&#8217;s existence. I can see her point.</p>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 05:00:21 +0000</pubDate>
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